Monday, December 8, 2014

love poem written by me

To the person without whom my life is incomplete
At first it was nothing but a conversation
I loved the feeling and you’ve become my inspiration
Now you’re  always in my heart sensation
And your smile makes my life into perfection

It’s so dark when I’m not with you
I stare at the moon so blue
I gaze at the stars , i feel you
And I hope you’re feeling the same I do.

I want you with me day and night
I really love you with all my heart
I hope you and I will fall apart

And be each other’s meaning of life.

4 comments:

  1. i loved the poem i think it's amazing, however fall apart isn't positive it means split and break , i don't know why u said "I hope you and I will fall apart" . good job anyway

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    1. Lol it was meant to be "will never*" fall apart , i'm sorry it was a mistake and i don't know how to edit that :p thank you though

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